Matt Bellamy

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I liked to lie on your bed and just be If I lie on my own bed and be I am just being alone. But no, no more of this ...

Loved the first stanza, great metaphor. I don't think the ... (there's a word for that, but it escapes me at the moment) was needed in the last line or ...

I can't find anything wrong with this because I don't really understand it. However, I can tell you the bits I thought worked well: inhibiting your drawing-blanks your nothing-thoughts... bloodied, ...

Cellophane regrets. Very nice. I don't like "that" at the beginning of that line, and some of the poem didn't seem to flow very well, but you played with imagery ...

^^ Cliff Edge (13+), by Duskglimmer (great idea, Snoink)

I liked it. But here: And wondering who'll catch me Please say that someone will catch me Catch me and save me from that deadly fall I felt there were ...

I'm not sure, maybe straight after the first one? Makes it sound more intense. And maybe put the second bleed in italics? Bleed until you are sorry Bleed until you ...

I don't know. But some people don't capitalise, intentionally.

Yay for alliteration! Rest in peace please peace please peace please Love that. EDIT: Sorry, I voted wrong cuz I assumed yes would be at the top and no would ...

"That I’m walking away from u?" u? u? Argh! Hehe text speak in poems is one of my pet peeves, but it's nice to see it's the only one in ...

Ooh, I really liked this. The best bit was, "Bleed until you are sorry! ... But you will never be sorry" because it seemed really energetic and angry, and then...a ...

The last stanza does rhyme, doesn't it? I think this rhymed and flowed well, and an interesting idea. Good job.

I think the short, choppy lines worked really well in giving the feeling on energy, made me read it faster. Capitalising your I's would be good though, but if you ...

"I love so you so much" -One too many so's, I think. Other than that, everyone's pretty much said what I was going to say. I'd prefer the poem though ...